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Re: Love never leaves you

Posted By: mandy
Date: Saturday, 9 December 2006, at 1:37 p.m.

In Response To: Love never leaves you (Amy)

: Your light so bright
: I bask in your radience
: You leave, I am dark
: Where is my own light?

: I search inside
: Only fear, anger, bitterness
: Where is this love
: Everyone speaks of?

: The White Demon scratches at me
: Violent images of hate and hell
: Left to hurt, to be destroyed
: All love and trust gone.

: I am afraid
: What if I cannot be saved
: Am I a lost child?
: I want to be found.

: Tick tock clock
: A tear falls
: God are you there?
: Why can't I find you?

: My mind knows You are there
: Knows to stop looking
: And You will appear
: My heart is afraid, empty

: Love all around me
: And I can't connect
: Other children wrapped in love and light
: Me wrapped in hate and fear

: When will it end?
: A lifetime dedicated
: to overcoming darkness
: Fear and unhappiness?

: Love never leaves you
: But darkness never leaves me.

this poem is very intense. i like it alot, u spoke to me.
darkness is constant, loves vanishes like smoke, its seems never to be there, but in the end the light will shine, chasing away the dark and illuminating the love.

Messages In This Thread

• Love never leaves you
  Amy -- Friday, 3 February 2006, at 9:16 p.m.
  • Re: Love never leaves you
    mandy -- Saturday, 9 December 2006, at 1:37 p.m.
    • VERY BEAUTIFUL!! *NM*
      Doug Newsom -- Sunday, 10 December 2006, at 11:14 p.m.

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