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What a tender sentiment... Bravo!

Posted By: Derek
Date: Friday, 31 March 2006, at 8:32 a.m.

In Response To: Enraptured (Doug Newsom)

Gorgeous poem. I enjoy open-ended poetry. What you seek in this poem depends on the reader: could be a loved one or friend, or god, or a truth, ect. Nice imagery as well, especially the 'ghostly charriot' line.

Enraptured

: I search the endless corridors,
: The mountains, the abyss,
: And trek the gardens of your soul
: For you, for what I miss.

: And light the everlasting flame,
: And herald down the saints,
: To call upon you endlessly
: Cause my love, it waits.

: And when the ghostly chariot,
: Spirits me away,
: I’ll search the heavens once again,
: For you my love, always.

Messages In This Thread

  • Enraptured
    Doug Newsom -- Saturday, 18 March 2006, at 9:34 p.m.
    • What a tender sentiment... Bravo!
      Derek -- Friday, 31 March 2006, at 8:32 a.m.
    • Re: Enraptured
      Dr.Valerie -- Saturday, 6 May 2006, at 2:07 p.m.

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